My Story.

[wetherwacky]

Howdy Ya'll!

I really need some honest feedback on ways to improve my story. Read it if you have enough time ;D and tell me what you think about it. I am feeling that it might be getting a little redundant, but I need some more opinions.

It was originally a short story, but it shot out of that length bracket a while ago. It's name, as of now, is "Caleb's Caleb and Jack's Jack." Its main inspiration is the Waltons, specifically Jim Bob.

Go to "The Writing Corner" and then to "Caleb's Caleb and Jack's Jack ~ My Short Story". It has nine parts so far.

Here it is. waltonswebpage.proboards83.com/?board=writing&action=display&thread=62&page=1


Read and Enjoy! Honest criticism needed.